Denise R. Weuve

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Day 12 ~ Saeed Jones

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I can’t imagine you do not know who Saeed Jones is. You probably do. I can’t imagine not wanting to be Saeed Jones’ friend. You probably are. I can’t imagine what happens in his mind that makes him so damn good. It has to be a beautiful place. I only recently read Prelude to Bruise. I was immediately turned into awe when I read the first poem in the book “Antracite”, the last sentence which rolls over 4 lines Beware/of how they want you;/in this town everything born black/also burns. Nevermind the fact that coverage of young black men being murders adds pathos to these lines, but the lines without that knowledge have such an attachement to not only the poet but the history that it transcends pathos, and brings ethos and logos along for the ride in a beautiful poem. Name a great poem that doesn’t do that? You can’t.

Very dear to my heart is the use of mythology in several of his poems. What if the myths took place in present time? What were the mythological characaters like before their myth? Or what happened to them after the myth was over? Jones wrote a piece called “Daedalus, After Icarus” that is just as moving and tragic as the story we all know of Icarus.

If for any reason you do not have Prelude to Bruise, please BUY it, you need this book in your life. (Cool Factor-He’s Buzzfeed Lit Ed)

 

The first poem is courtesy PBS, Weekly poem and the title of his book

 

Prelude to Bruise

In Birmingham, said the burly man—

Boy, be
a bootblack.

Your back, blue-black.
Your body,                     burning.

I like my black boys broke, or broken.
I like to break my black boys in.

See this burnished
brown leather belt?
You see it, boy?

Are you broke, or broken?
I’m gonna break your back in.

Good boy. Begin: bend
over my boot,

(or I’ll bend you over my lap–rap rap)

again, bend. Better,

butt out, tongue out,
lean in.

Now, spit-shine.
Spit-polish.

My boot, black.
Your back, blue-black.

Good boy.
Black boy, blue-black boy.
Bad boy–rap rap.

You’ve been broken in.
Begin again, bend.

 

And from Youtube, the poem I mention in the first paragraph. Antracite

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